Author: Lisa Unger
Series: Hush Collection #6
First Published: July 30, 2020
Publisher: Amazon Original Stories
Pages: 59
Genre: Mystery, Short Stories
Format: Ebook
Source: Prime Reading
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Synopsis:
A writer’s misguided suspicions ruined his life once before. This time he plans to prove he’s right in a New York Times bestselling author’s haunting short story of what happens when seeing is not believing.
Will, an aspiring novelist, can’t stop parsing his ex-girlfriend’s popular social media accounts for clues that her ideal new rural life with the perfect man has a dark side. After all, nobody he knows has actually seen the blissful blogger in the flesh for nearly a year. When Will draws a wary friend into his “investigation,” the real question becomes who’s truly in danger.
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This story had such a good premise and I wish I could have loved it, I honestly truly did. Will is struggling to move on from his girlfriend after a tumultuous relationship that ended in a restraining order. He does all the things he should be doing: going to therapy, controlling his anger, and trying to get his life going, but he finds himself stuck. He wishes so badly that he could get closure on their relationship.
This story does a good job of exploring modern breakups in a world connected online through social media. It is so easy to feel tempted to look up an ex’s social media accounts to “see how they’re doing.” It is an unhealthy habit that lets people feel like they still have access to the lives of people they used to know. All we see on social media feeds is how happy people are, we all tend to post our best lives and leave out the ugly parts.
Will starts to wonder if the new life that his ex presents online is real and worries for her safety. Will is unstable and engaging in stalking behavior, despite telling himself constantly that he needs to respect her boundaries. It is a recipe for disaster that could have made a great thriller. Unfortunately, the story’s direction becomes easy to ascertain and in another direction, toward romantic suspense.
The story does the unthinkable and tells you what plot device was being used the entire time, and I didn’t find it cute or cheeky. There was so much potential for this story but it never delivers on the premise. The good commentary about the fake veneer of online personalities was not enough to save the red herring it serves for the plot. This is my second attempt at a short with Lisa Unger and I felt underwhelmed despite her gorgeous writing style. She creates interesting scenarios and her writing is engaging, but both times I’ve felt unsatisfied with the ending.
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“I spend too many hours scrolling through her feeds, reading her words. Time I could spend moving on. Working on my novel. Getting a real job. The days seem to disappear.”
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