The Silence of Ghosts

The Silence of Ghosts

The Silence of GhostsTitle: The Silence of Ghosts
Author: Jonathan Aycliffe
First Published: October 17, 2013
Publisher: Night Shade
Pages: 192
Genre: Gothic, Horror, Paranormal
Format: Hardcover
Source: Library
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Synopsis:

Those who live in silence hear them best . . .

Dominic Lancaster hoped to prove himself to his family by excelling in the Navy during World War II. Instead he is wounded while serving as a gunner, and loses his leg. Still recovering from his wounds and the trauma of his amputation when the Blitz begins, Dominic finds himself shuffled off to the countryside by his family, along with his partially deaf sister, Octavia. The crumbling family estate on the shores of Ullswater is an old, much-neglected place that doesn’t seem to promise much in the way of happiness or recovery.

Something more than a friendship begins to flourish between Dominic and his nurse Rose in the late autumn of that English countryside, as he struggles to come to terms with his new life as an amputee. Another thing that seems to be flourishing is Octavia’s hearing.

As winter descends, sinister forces seem to be materializing around Octavia, who is hearing voices of children. After seeing things that no one else can see and hearing things that no one else can hear, Octavia is afflicted with a sickness that cannot be explained. With Octavia’s help, Dominic sets out to find the truth behind the voices that have haunted his sister. In doing so, he uncovers an even older, darker evil that threatens not only Octavia, but Rose and himself.

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Review

I’ll be upfront that The Silence of Ghosts was a bit of a disappointment and it’s a shame because I was so excited to read it. I love a good haunted house story and a couple of bloggers and booktubers I follow gave it decent reviews. The story is extremely slow and meanders a lot, and I had to really push myself to finish.

The book is told through a series of diary entries left behind by Dominic, a disabled World War II veteran, and his experiences with the supernatural hauntings at Hallinhag House. The strange occurrences seem benign at first but quickly become chilling once the implications of what is happening starts to sink in. Descriptions of the hauntings flow so naturally in the diary entries that it makes the story feel like it could be real, a definite high point for the book.

The first thing that I felt was a mistake about this book was the prologue, where a major character’s death is spoiled immediately, leaving no mystery to the plot and no chance of emotional investment that readers might have had in this character. This tactic of building dread for the eventual outcome can work in some books by shifting the focus from the who to the how, but I don’t feel that the plot was well constructed enough to pull this off.

In true gothic fashion, there is a romance. After the first couple of hauntings, the plot slows to a crawl, spending more time dawdling over Dominic’s romance with his nurse, Rose. I found the romance unconvincing and it all unfortunately just felt like fluff. After a while, even the hauntings began to feel tiring, with no clear progression of the story. It started to just feel like loosely connected events that lead nowhere with an extremely anti-climatic ending.

In the end, I think this book had some potential and could have been a good read if there was more mystery and plot development. It just didn’t work out for me.

Quote

“Because somebody’s living in this house. I heard them earlier. Whispering. When I turned round there was no one there. But there was still whispering.”

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About the Author

About Jonathan Aycliffe

Jonathan Aycliffe (Denis M. MacEoin) was born in Belfast in 1949. He studied English, Persian, Arabic and Islamic studies at the universities of Dublin, Edinburgh and Cambridge, and lectured at the universities of Fez in Morocco and Newcastle upon Tyne. The author of several successful full-length ghost stories, he lives in the north of England with his wife, homeopath and health writer, Beth MacEoin. He also writes as Daniel Easterman, under which name he has penned nine bestselling novels.


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